Well done for the quick approach to feedback, but I don't feel you've really responded to all the points. Take slides 4 and 5 - do you think the examiner has enough intimate knowledge of Ed Sheeran and Hozier's video to draw the connections between them and your piece themselves? You need to present really specific examples. With the print productions section, you are clear when talking about the existing products, but say very little about how your own product compares or contrasts.
Well done for the quick approach to feedback, but I don't feel you've really responded to all the points. Take slides 4 and 5 - do you think the examiner has enough intimate knowledge of Ed Sheeran and Hozier's video to draw the connections between them and your piece themselves? You need to present really specific examples. With the print productions section, you are clear when talking about the existing products, but say very little about how your own product compares or contrasts.
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